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I came to check you out. And I liked this drawing personally, reminded me of Donnie Darko. You have a beautiful gallery and I'll certainly keep a close eye on you.
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This prolly just me iight, so bear wit me. Look at his eyeballs. iight, u see the one thats big, visible, and powerful? And then to the side, u see the shadow of it cus of the hair? I know that the shadow is there, but I think that part lacked depth of the shape. What I'm saying is it looks like he aint got an eye. or either dat, the eye is more upwards. what I rpolly would have done, if i was u, dat i would have made that shadowed part more visible for the eye to show that is hidden under. u know what im saying? it looks pretty flat right there. give it more depth and shape around dat shadowin area.
otherwise, it lookin-like-uh pelle to me. It think ur drawing looks good.